Ver. 1.01 up!

First of all, thank you all—this story took off way more than I even hoped it would, and it's immensely gratifying to see my little weird sci-fi make its way in the world.

This is a small update with a big thanks to reader q_izzical, who caught two repeated lines I missed. I edited those paragraphs a tiny bit and re-uploaded all versions. Feel free to replace your existing versions as you please!